Is my magic deck good?

Its a green and white token deck. If you have any suggestions tell me. Here are the cards.





LAND


10 Forest


9 Plains


2 Selesnya Sanctuary


1 Vitu-Ghazi, the City-Tree


1 Brushland





CREATURE


2 Watchwolf


2 Selesnya Evangel


2 Lantern Kami


2 Conclave Phalanx


1 Sasaya, Orochi Ascendant


1 Vinelasher Kudzu


1 Nightguard Patrol


1 Skyhunter Prowler


1 Tolsimir Wolfblood


1 Weathered Wayfarer


1 Pegasus Charger


1 Orochi Eggwatcher


1 Loxodon Gatekeeper


1 Ayumi, the Last Visitor


1 Bramble Elemental


1 Scion of the Wild


1 Promised Kannushi


1 Autochthon Wurm





INSTANT/ENCHANTMENT/SORCERY/ARTIFACT


2 Spiritual Visit


2 Fists of Ironwood


2 Scatter the Seeds


2 Kodama's Might


2 Unchecked Growth


1 Doubling Season


1 Beacon of Creation


1 Pollenbright Wings


1 Life from the Loam


1 Nourishing Shoal


1 Dryad's Caress


1 Chastise


1 Roar of Jukai


1 Giant Growth


1 Ferocious Charge


1 Shell of the Last Kappa

Is my magic deck good?
yes...





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Reply:Most of this deck is good, but i am not very good at telling you exactly what is wrong because i'm only specialized in Black type cards, i think you need less creatures though
Reply:awsome thoes cards are sweet. good luck in what ever your doing.
Reply:Wow!! That's awesome....I wish I had those
Reply:No it's bad, sorry. You have too many cards in the deck (43 spell and 23 land, 66 total). You need to take out 5 or six spell cards. There's a lot of tweaking needed to be done to make it a strong deck. Now 66 isn't that many but with your land count, you may have trouble drawing lands.


Just a few things to start with:


You have too many single cards (some singles are OK), you should have multiple copies so you have a better chance in drawing them. If you slim it down to 60 cards and you only have one Doubling Season in the deck you have a 1 in 48 chance of drawing it by the time you can cast it. And you want it out as early as possible for when you are making token creatures. If you have 4 in your deck then by your fifth turn instead on a 1 in 48 chance you now have a 1 in 12 chance of drawing one if you haven't already drawn one. If you want help LMK. I am available to email.





Second version looks much better at a quick glance. I would take out 1 Scion and the 2 Lantern Kami and put in 3 Sprout Swarm.
Reply:As Big meantioned, you have too many of 1 card. This deck would be much better if you had 3-4 of each card in your deck. I recommend upping your count. And since you are running 66 cars total your gonna have to throw out 6 cards or at least sidebord them.
Reply:The deck looks pretty fun, but the problem is that due to you having so many singles as a poster above me mentioned, it's going to be hard to draw the ones you want.