Sunday, January 15, 2012

How's about reviewin' todays luv poem and gimme feedback?

Kudzu's a'growin,


Molasses is sweet,


I'd crawl a dadgum mile,


Jist to tickle yer feet.





Momma's at tha market,


Daddy off a'drankin,


Use that purdy mind,


Do ye know what Im'a thankin?





I done fed them hawgs,


Got me a bath in tha pond,


Splashed on some parfume,


Er ye really a'blonde?





When ye lay down in the bed,


And yer chores is all done,


Im'a hopin you'll thank of me,


And we kin soon have sum fun.

How's about reviewin' todays luv poem and gimme feedback?
William Shakespear has nothing on you.
Reply:Catchy...but I don't know about a love poem
Reply:A little perversion here....
Reply:that's sweet!
Reply:Beautiful honey!





You might win one of those pulsating prizes they give out.
Reply:Dat real purty-like dere RoyBoy!
Reply:why,roy...


you're a poet and don't know it!!lol!!


i love ya man!
Reply:awwwwwwwww...Roy that is purdier than your toes!!
Reply:I LOVE this! How cute. Did you really make this up or is it plagiarism.
Reply:It's amongst your best works.
Reply:good
Reply:roses are red,


grass is green,


I like ur legs,


and what is in between


********lol*******
Reply:c00lz
Reply:That dere makes me wanna dance a jig. It's so purrty.
Reply:10/10. Brought tears to my eyes. Why are you so mushy today?


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